This is your final approval email.
Loan amount: [amount]
Purchase price: [bigger amount]
Rate locked: [damn fine fixed rate]
Premium credit: [not bad]
Rate expiration: 11/12/2009
Closing date: 11/12/2009
Title will be held as: JOYCE [last name]
Estimated funds due at closing: [incorrect number, needs fixing], our closing department will contact your directly with the final numbers once they have approved the final settlement statement.
Thank you again for choosing [Corporate Monolith]